注意事项:
①叙述该交通事故的过程及其他相关情况应用一般过去时态;
②注意安排好写作顺序,使其有较强的条理性;
③使用恰当的过渡词使行文连贯。
3.佳作赏析
A Traffic Accident
Last Sunday, an unexpected traffic accident happened to an old lady. It was 9:30 a.m. An old lady was knocked down by a young man when she was walking across the street on the second crossing of Xinhua Street.
The lady was badly hurt and unconscious. The police was called and the lady was sent to hospital by an ambulance. After inquiry, the police proved that it was the young man's fault because he didn't stop his bike when the traffic lights were red.
From the accident, I realize that the traffic safety is worthy of enough attention. We can't be too careful when using the roads.
4.满分揭秘:
文章将事故的相关情况清楚详细地进行了叙述,作者将长句和短句有机地结合起来,其中运用了许多主从复合句,这是文章的一大亮点。另一大亮点是其中的高级词汇的准确运用,如unexpected, unconscious, inquiry, be worthy of, not be too…等。综上所述,该文理应属于一篇优秀作文。
四、小试牛刀
根据下列提示写一篇不少于150词的日记。
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