写作进阶提升之五 ——教你如何行文及润色

　　写作进阶提升 五个步骤 1、审题 （文体、主题、内容、人称、时态） 2、提炼要点，思考关键词 3、紧扣要点，连词成句 4、连句成文： ①主语和谓语 ②背景（增加时间、地点条件等） ③逻辑关系 ④开头与结尾 5、检查修改，规范抄写 ⑤语篇衔接

　　Some students think it is not good for people to keep pets in cities, because it will cause pollution to our environment. And the pets always make a noise that will disturb others.

　　However, others think we should see the positive aspects of keeping animals. It is very necessary for the lonely old people to have company and pets can be a good choice. If we can get on well with the animals, it will enrich our life, too.

　　I think if we really love animals, we needn’t show our love to them by keeping them, because the pets are not free and it’s not fair to the animals. If we donate the money used in keeping pets to some animal organizations, it will be more helpful to the animals.

　　(By Dong Shuoyi)

　　Some say that dogs make a big noise in the community, and sometime they even hurt people. Besides, animal drops also pollute the environment. They don’t agree to have pets in cities.

　　Although I admit all the disadvantages they mentioned, compared to the highlights, pets bring such shortcomings seem to be as small as a pencil tip.

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