2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第20讲如何写图画类作文_高考复习指南

2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第20讲如何写图画类作文

　　体裁图画类作文中心人称第一人称第三人称主体时态一般现在时一般过去时要点布局第一段:描述图画(抓住主要“画意”,避免面面俱到)。第二段:概述画面透露的含义。第三段:具体谈谈个人感想。审题谋篇考场作文: In the picture, we can see a boy in rags. He was ①siting at a table with a pile of books on it. (1)He was reading a book attentively with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall. ②As is known to us that this is a story from an ancient Chinese idiom. So poor was the boy that he couldn't afford even a candle.Thus, in order to read at night, he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house. What we can learn from the story is that we should do what we can ③acquire knowledge when faced with difficult situations. (2)When we try to im- prove ourselves by learning, we can make good preparations for the future. 文章提升: 1.修改错误: 1)sit的现在分词应先双写t,然后加-ing,故应将 ①siting改为。 2)②As处于形式主语的位置,故应将As改为　 . 3)此处应用不定式作目的状语,故应将③ac- quire改为 . 2.提升建议: 1)用强调句型对画线句(1)中的with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall进行强调: 2)将画线句(2)改为以only+when从句开头的句子: 阅卷现场参考范文: In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading. This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn't afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at night. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be. Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the sto-ry that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future. 答案 1.修改错误:1)sitting　2)It　3)to acquire 2.提升建议: 1)It was with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall that he was reading a book attentively. 2)Only when we try to improve ourselves by learning can we make good prepara- tions for the future. 四、高分秀场 (2015山东济宁高三一模) 下面是英语老师推荐的两本课外阅读书籍,请根据以下提示用英语写一篇100 词左右的短文: 1.说明你会选择哪一本书阅读; 2.该书的大概内容; 3.你选择该书的理由。