2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第16讲如何写事物说明文_高考复习指南

2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第16讲如何写事物说明文

　　There are certain factors I take into account on my new invention. For one thing, traditional water bottle makes it inconvenient for travelers to have a comfortable drink anytime and anywhere. For another, drinking too cold or too hot water does nothing but harm to our health, so my magic water bottle can serve as an assistant or a doctor. The new functions will win my magic water bottle enormous love and popularity. On the one hand, the automatic temperature-controlling system mentioned above can adjust the water temperature. On the other hand, we can set a desirable temperature for the inside water, and what surprises us most is that the water can remain at that temperature for about twenty hours. 答案 1.修改错误:1)its　2)for　3)an

　　2.提升建议:Thirdly, equipped with a GPS software, the schoolbag can help you find the correct way when you lose your way.

　　四、高分秀场 (2017湖南衡阳八中第6次月考) 请以“Harmfulness of fake products”为题,写一篇不少于120词的文章,主要内容包括以下几个方面: 1.市场商品丰富,但假冒商品频繁出现; 2.假冒商品的危害; 3.应对假冒商品的措施。

　　答案 One possible version: Harmfulness of fake products As is known to all,China has undergone great changes in terms of product quality and variety over the last several decades. Nowadays,commodities and products of all kinds are sufficiently provided on the market. Meanwhile,a lot of fake products have appeared. Like worms that eat away the core of a good apple,fake products are threatening the well-being of individuals as well as our society. Fake products bring serious damage to our society. Consumers are robbed of their money and have to bear the consequence caused by fake products. For example,it is reported by the media that several dozens of people were poisoned to death by fake alcohol. Measures must be taken to ban the production of fake products. On the one hand, fake products must not be sold on the market,and strict laws should be made and enforced against fake producers,and those who sell fake products should be severely punished. On the other hand,consumers must learn how to protect them- selves. Only with the joint effort of the whole society can we handle the problem properly.