2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第13讲过渡在写作中的应用_高考复习指南

2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第13讲过渡在写作中的应用

　　同学们要熟记下表中在写作中常用的过渡语: 表时间 at first、then、afterwards、before、after、in the end、later、in the future、immediately 表顺序 first、second、then、lastly、finally、last but not least 表并列或递进 besides、what's more、in addition、also、moreover、furthermore、worse still 表个人观点 in my opinion/view、from my point of view、as far as I'm concerned 表总结 in a word、in general、to sum up、all in all、in summary、in conclusion、generally speak-ing、in brief 表转折或对比 however、on the contrary、yet、by compari-son、by contrast、on the other hand 表因果 therefore、thus、as a result、so (三)正确使用段落主题句和总结句。段落主题句和总结句可以使文章首尾呼应,在意义上形成一个整体从而在宏观层次上达到增强句子连贯性的目的。

　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morning,we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival,we began to work immediately.Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees.Others were watering them.After getting the work done,we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Be- fore leaving we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees,we all had a sense of achievement.We feel it's our duty to protect and beau- tify our environment. 【评析】　在段落的开头作者用一个句子点出了段落中心思想,在文章的结尾再次用一个句子表达了自己参加“绿色行动”的感受,从而升华了主题。另外,在中间部分作者通过合理运用in the morning、upon arrival、after getting the work done、before leaving和seeing the lines of trees等过渡语使活动的整个过程以时间为序有机融为一体,很好地体现了文章的连贯性,值得大家学习和模仿。二、学以致用 1.完美文章