2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第12讲扩展句在写作中的应用_高考复习指南

2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第12讲扩展句在写作中的应用

　　 With the science and technology developing, I'm optimistic about life in the fu- ture. By that time the surroundings where we live will be more comfortable and beautiful. In addition, new forms of energy such as solar energy, wind energy will be made full use of, which will be of great use for protecting the environment. Al- so, robots as well as other high-tech products will go into common families. Not only can they help people do housework, but also they can look after the babies. Such is the life in future which is bound to be more comfortable and convenient.

　　答案 One possible version: 三、美文赏读 (2017福建) 如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quota- tion),按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusi- asm.” —Sir Winston Churchill 内容要求: 1.你对该引语的理解; 2.你的相关经历; 3.恰当的结尾。注意: 1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息; 3.词数120左右。 [我来试写] This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that

　　答案 One possible version: This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather,we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve,I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However,it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still,I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice,I did better and better.Looking back,I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually,we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick at it. 【写作点评】本文作者充分结合自身经历阐释了自己对题目要求中引语的看法。文中主题句概括准确,扩展句充分、合理,总结句深刻、到位,句式结构丰富多彩,展示了作者高超的语言驾驭能力。