三、美文赏读 (2017重庆 写作二) 青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享 心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。假 设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括: ●赞同Susan的看法 ●你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么 ●该礼物的意义 ●期待大家回复 注意:(1)词数不少于80; (2)符合语言规范; (3)开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 [我来试写] I am a high school student from China.
答案 One possible version: I am a high school student from China.Recently I have read an article ①which/ that was written by Susan Beacham,②who thinks whether a gift is suitable lies not in its value but in the giver's heart,and that the giver should devote time and energy to the gift.I agree with Susan,③whose article reminds me of my best gift,a pen given by my father,④who was a worker.When I was in junior middle school, my father bought me a nice pen with his small salary,wishing me to study hard. From then on,the pen has been my best companion,⑤which has been encouraging me to study hard.I am looking forward to everyone's reply. 本文①—⑤充分运用了which、that、who、whose引导的定语从句,从而符合 了高考书面表达评分标准中“尽力使用较复杂结构”这一要求,给文章增添 了亮色,给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象,提升了作文档次。
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