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本文是限内容、给提纲的控制性作文,由于是写当下的社会现象,所以时态要以一般现happen或take place,且只能用主动语态不能用被动语态;“采取措施”用英语表达为“take steps(measures/action)”。
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With the rapid development of China's economy,more and more people own their private cars.Some drivers don't always obey the traffic rules,so traffic accidents are often happening.A recent survey shows in 2017 there are 26 million traffic illegal acts,an average of over 70 thousand a day.
Behind the numbers,we can see the seriousness of our country's road safety.The main reason for traffic accidents is drunk driving.Besides,running the red light and speeding also result in this situation.
In my point of view,we must take immediate action to reduce the traffic accidents.For example,drivers should be punished without mercy.At the same time,the government should call on people to obey the traffic rules.Only when we cut down the traffic accidents can we live a happier life.
[亮点点击] 此篇文章结构完整,短文使用了较灵活的句式,如简单句、并列句、状语从句和倒装句等,使文章长短句结合,错落有致。
亮点短语和词组:with the rapid development of,an average of,running the red light,without mercy,take action,call on,cut down,live a happier life。
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