In the following days, I buried myself preparing for the competition. My classmates all volunteered to help. Some of them dictated to me various characters they found in the dictionary while others offered to check my answers. As the competition was approaching, I felt more and more confident. The day finally came. Some characters were so challenging that many of the competitors got stuck while I was able to write down most of them and won the first prize.

　　When I was standing excitedly on the stage, pictures of my classmates helping and encouraging me flashed into my mind. The victory and honor belonged to all of us.

　　【思路点拨】 本文是应用文，要求学生就参加汉语听写大赛写一日记，故应用一般过去时和第一人称。

　　该文章完全完成了试题规定的任务，内容完整，条理清楚。所用语法和词汇满足了任务要求，应用得体。Preparing分词短语作宾语补足语；when和while引导的时间状语从句的应用以及最后一段的动名词的复合结构做主语等都彰显了作者的扎实的英语功底。

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