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四、Possible version:
Our class planned to organize an activity on March 5th , the day in memory of Lei Feng. The day before, we had had a class meeting to discuss what we would do. After a heated discussion, we had decided to got to a senior citizens home to do something for the elderly.
On March 5th, we set our early in the mornig. As soon as we got to the senior citizens home, we first did a thorough cleaning. Some swept and mopped the floor. Some cleaned the windows and the others did some washing. An hour later, the rooms in the senior citizens home looked clean and tidy. And then we were divided into two groups. One group gave wonderful performances that the elderly enjoyed a lot, the other group taught those who were interested in English some daily English expressions. All the elderly had a good time with us. When lunch time came we had to say good-bye to them.
We’ve really learned a lot from what we did. We also realize that we can make ourselves useful to those who need help and care.
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