In my opinion, the baton represents love, which can be passed on from one person to another. If one does a good deed, other people will feel the love and care from him/her. This can inspire more people to show their love and care to someone who is in need of it. In this way, love is transferred among people and a harmonious world of lasting peace will be built.
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