2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。

　　Dear Alice，

　　Hope everything goes well with you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　考生作文：

　　Dear Alice，

　　Hope everything goes well with you. Do you still sleep very_late① every night? I'm writing to share my ideas on how_to_live_a_healthy life_②.

　　First of all, I think you'd_better_eat_more_fruits_and_vegetables ③ instead of snacks. Also, you need to kill④ the habit of drinking cola only. Why not drink more water? If you spend less time on your smart phone, you can have more time to get together with friends. Moreover⑤， don't you think you_can_look_well­built_by_doing_ sports⑥ and feel energetic meantime⑦.

　　All in all, a healthy life style makes us healthy, rich⑧ and wise in the future. Hopefully you can follow my advice and make a change from now on.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　①换为短语：__________________________________________

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