An alternative student version:

　　When I Have a Different Opinion

　　We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

　　The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism; I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.

　　（8）

　　Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.

　　【解析】本题考查开放性作文写作，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。not only, but…as well以及虚拟语气。结尾部分用表达了对“回不到过去”的惋惜。总体上来说本文结构紧凑，层次分明，是一篇不可多得的好文章。

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