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As_a_student,_I_can_tell_you_that_there_is_nothing_better_than_being_praised_by_my_teacher_before_my_classmates. Never will I forget one experience in an English class last year.①
I felt extremely nervous the instant the class began. The reason was that the new English teacher Mr Zhang might announce the exam result and that I would probably get scolded as before.② Surprisingly, when entering the classroom, he glanced at us, saying gently, “Today, I won't talk about the exam result, but I am excited to tell you Li Jia wrote an excellent English article in the exam. I do hope he will make more progress with great efforts.”③ On hearing what he said, I couldn't hold back my tears. It was for the first time that I got praised before my classmates.④ From then on, I fell in love with English. You can't imagine how grateful I am to Mr Zhang. Without his praise, I couldn't have gone so far in my English study.
[解析] ①never位于句首,引起倒装,“我永远不会忘记去年一次英语课上的经历”。
②“The reason was that...and that...”两个that引导的表语从句。“新老师张先生会宣布考试结果和我可能会像以前一样受到责备”,道出了紧张的原因。
③“entering”前省略了“he was”更加简洁,saying作伴随状语,他看着我们,温柔地说……。
④强调句的使用,突出“for the first time”,第一次被表扬。
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