2017届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编（第02期）：专题06 书面表达（教师版）_高考复习指南

2017届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编（第02期）：专题06 书面表达（教师版）

　　2017届高考模拟试题分类汇编（2）之书面表达

　　参考词汇：雾霾haze

　　雾霾天气hazy weather

　　Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China._______________

　　【答案】

　　Recently hazy weather has occurred in many areas of China, which has great harm to our daily life. And it has become a growing concern throughout the country.

　　It’s obvious that hazy weather has many negative effects. First of all, people’s health is threatened and some of them even suffer from diseases such as coughing. In addition, more traffic jams and more accidents arise from it, which in turn disturbs people’s normal life.

　　Faced with this situation, we are supposed to raise the awareness of environmental protection. Not only should we stop sending out harmful gases, but more energy should be saved in our daily life. Meanwhile, importance should be attached to planting trees. Only when we take effective measures, will our environment make a difference.

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