②First, I'm an energetic outgoing girl/boy with great patience. That's what makes a qualified teacher, in my opinion. ③Besides, I am crazy about the English language, and I am doing quite well. ④Above all, teachers are generally respected and wellpaid. With two vacations each year, I may enjoy more relaxing time. ⑤As a responsible girl/boy, I hope to take up a job which is beneficial to society. Being a good teacher may influence more students to shoulder their responsibilities and contribute to their country.
⑥In short, I'll work even harder to become a popular English teacher.
【解析】
试题分析:你校将举办主题为“未来工作畅想”的征文活动。请你根据下面所给要点写一篇英语短文。1.你梦想的工作(1点);2.你的兴趣或特长(两点);该工作的重要性(两点)。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语短文,采用三段式,要点突出,结构严谨,布局合理,句中使用高级句子。Talking of my dream job, I expect to be an English teacher for the following reasons.现在分词做时间状语;That's what makes a qualified teacher, in my opinion.句中运用表语从句;teachers are generally respected and wellpaid.被动语态用在句中;I hope to take up a job which is beneficial to society. 非限制性定语从句巧妙运用;Being a good teacher may influence more students to shoulder their responsibilities and contribute to their country.动名词作主语;另外,First, Besides, Above all, With two vacations each year, As a responsible girl/boy, In short,的使用为文章增色添彩。
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