I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.The purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in.According to the program, we will plant different kinds of trees, flowers and grass in and around our school.A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in.Besides, we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest.What’s more,

　　some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder.

　　Welcome to our school if you have any chance.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【注】 由于主语灵活变动， 使文章读起来摆脱了呆板， 行文有了生气。

　　探究点二　句子的质量

　　我们经常说某个句子地道， 就是因为这个句子体现了英语民族的思维方式。在基础写作中，要经常使用这种地道的句子。

　　【举例说明】

　　比较以下句子：

　　1．Clinton had wanted to collect a heavy tax on the middle class.

　　修改后：A heavy tax on the middle class was Clinton’s idea.

　　2．The people who listen to the radio have a habit of getting up early, but those who watch TV usually go to bed late.

　　修改后：Radio listeners are early birds, but TV viewers are usually night owls.

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