The Best Gift
Della and Jim broke away from their families to get married.Now they lived in a small attic of a cold and old building.They were now digesting the hardship of life.The only joy was their sweet love for each other.The handsome husband had to be burdened with a family
though he was young.The beautiful wife took care of the shabby house with the few coins she saved.Christmas was coming.They were thinking of a good gift for each other.Della wore a waterfall of black hair, but her comb was broken.Jim had a gold watch with an old chain, which was passed from his old grandfather.The big day finally came.On arriving home, Jim was surprised to find Della's long hair cut short.But Della was also surprised to find Jim's gold watch gone.She had sold her hair to buy a gold watch chain for him! He had sold his gold watch to buy an expensive comb for her!
The gifts were now useless.But in fact they got the best gifts.
我们首先分析一下学生的样本, 看看存在什么问题, 要如何改进。
【样本1】
This passage tells us a story about a couple.They sold the most valuable thing for themselves to buy a gifts for each other.Even though the gifts became useless, they (had) received the best gift(s) indeed.
【样本2】
This story tells us that a husband Jim and a wife Della love each other.On Christmas, they send the best gifts to each other, but each lose their dear thing.The gifts are useless.
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