Of course，things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文简明扼要，要点齐全，信息丰富，条理清晰。灵活运用了高级词汇，如：shabby, be absorbed in, afford, spare no effort, acquire knowledge, get discouraged, count等，体现出作者丰富的词汇积累能力。句型上，运用了强调句型，丰富了句式结构；最后一句起到了画龙点睛的作用，是一篇上等佳作。

　　Writing 4　(2015·江苏)

　　请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。1．The other day, a netizen(网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo.It was about an old lady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle lane, and insisting that it leave the track.The photo drew about 7，000 comments on the social media platform.Despite the thumbs－up(点赞) given to the old lady, some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic.

　　2．Some riders of e－bikes and bicycles come and go in all directions, ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles.Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic.Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable.

　　3．From 2005 to 2017, the total number of private cars in China rose sharply from 32 million to 154 million.Currently, China had 15% of the worlds total vehicles.

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