首段:重述自己做错的事,表示歉意。
主体段落:说明道歉的具体原因,应尽量详细描述做错事的经过。写信时应该注意在申述理由时要照顾读信人的感受,切忌强词夺理。
结尾段:再次表明承认错误的态度,请求收信人的谅解。也可以提出补救的办法。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务,要点扩充合情合理,符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑:对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化,并没有一直使用陈述句,穿插使用祈使句,符合邀请函的特点。文章使用了较多的复合句,如定语从句Any students who is interested is welcome to participate;时间状语从句...the last time you visited our school;条件状语从句If you want to join...等。全文没有中国式英语句式,体现出很高的英语写作能力。
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