文章体裁 记叙文 中心人称 第一人称 主体时态 一般将来时 要点 布局 1.引题句:我经常想象未来的生活(已给出)。 2.主题句:统领下文,提炼主题,如十年后我的生活将和现在大不相同。 3.要点或扩展句: 4. 结尾句:总结全文,紧扣主题,如我的生活将丰富多彩。 审题谋篇 考场作文: I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.In ten years, I will have my own family, ①lead a happy life. As for my job, I will build up my own business. Not only will it ②helps me make a living, but it will also contribute to the development of the society. When I have free time, I will take ③regularly exercise and become a volunteer to help the elderly people. It is of great use to my life quality. In brief, I will spare no effort to make my future life meaning-ful.
文章提升: 1.修改错误: 1)lead如果作谓语动词前面应加连词and,故应将①lead改为 。 2)在not only引导的倒装句型中助动词will提前,主语后动词需用动词原形,故应将②helps改为 。 3)修饰名词需用形容词,故将③regularly改为 。 2.提升建议: 将画线部分改为非谓语动词作状语的形式: 。 阅卷现场 参考范文: I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different from what it is today in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely baby. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my spare time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. During my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be richer and more colorful.
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