2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
答案 One possible version: Boys and girls, Sometimes, life is a hard and bitter journey. Therefore, I'd like to say, “No mat-ter what happens, ①do be self-confident.” [我来试写]
I still remember that when I just entered this high school, I suffered a lot of stress and was too nervous to answer the teachers' questions whenever they asked me in class. Later, something happened that ②did change my life. An English speech contest was to be held in my class. ③It was with great efforts that the teacher per-suaded me to participate in it. He said ④it was so important an opportunity for me to build up my confidence that I shouldn't give it up. I chose a topic a bit chal-lenging for me—Self-confidence and Success. I wrote down whatever I had to say and kept reciting it. ⑤It was with the teacher's encouragement that I won a prize. From then on, I held a firm belief that self-confidence is the first step to success. Thus, my friends, ⑥do be self-confident and you will achieve success. That's all. Thank you.
【写作点评】 在文中①—⑥作者巧妙运用各种强调形式,不仅丰富了句式,而且突出了表达效果,增强了语言的感染力,出色完成了写作任务。
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