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审题谋篇 体裁 发言稿 中心人称 第一人称 主体时态 一般现在时 一般过去时 要点 布局 第一段:引入话题(已给出)。 第二段:从学习方法、学习习惯等角度阐释如何学会学习。 主题句:概述未来三年面临的挑战。 扩展句1:提高学习效率(注意结合个人经历)。 扩展句2:养成良好的学习习惯,如提前预习和及时复习等。 第三段:具体说明如何学会做人。 主题句:学会和他人相处。 扩展句1:要尊重老师,关爱同学(注意结合个人经历)。 扩展句2:说明真诚的意义。 第四段:根据自身情况选择其他方面说明未来应注意的事情。 主题句:我们应该积极锻炼身体、参加课外活动等。 扩展句:说明这样做的好处。 第五段:总结上文,展望未来生活。 考场作文: Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. Our school life in senior high school is different from what we lived in the junior middle school. In order to study well, we should form good habits such as ①preview before lessons and ②review lessons in time. What's more, we should learn some useful ways to study, like using some reference books. Besides, we should be-come ③useful person. We should be sincere and friendly. In this way, we can get along well with others and win true friendship.Of course, we should do exercise and keep ④health. If we do all the things well, we can spend a happy time in senior high school. Thank you! 文章提升: 1.修改错误: 1)such as是介词短语,故应将①和②分别改为 和 。 2)person是可数名词,useful发音以辅音音素开头,故应在③useful前加冠词 。 3)keep作“保持”讲时是系动词,后接形容词作表语,故应将④health改为 。 2.提升建议: 将画线部分改为倒装句: 阅卷现场 参考范文: Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school. In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn effi-ciently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively in-volved in class, and review what had been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. Not only are they helpful in building up our body, but they can also enrich our school life. No pains,no gains. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here. Thank you! 答案 1.修改错误:1)previewing;reviewing 2)a 3)healthy
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