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Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
【答案】One possible student version
Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍,结构合理,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对plan的理解,同时引出下文,然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语,避免了文章句式的单一。此外,还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。
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