Seeing this picture, I think of the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of orphans who need better care. It is everyone’s responsibility to help them realize that there are people who care about them.

　　Like the volunteers in the picture, I also have a willing heart to help people. I have every hope to visit the house for orphans, to donate my money to those who are in need and most importantly, to help the people around me whenever necessary.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇看图说话类作文。右边的照片展现了志愿者活动的一个情景。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文：1．简述照片内容；2．谈谈你的感想；3．说说你能做什么。首先要看懂图画内容，准确描述图画内容。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要谈谈自己的感想。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

　　【亮点说明】The picture above illustrates a scene that can be seen in our life, where volunteers went to look after the old people.这里含有两个定语从句；They send them not only the things the old need but also their love to those who need care most.这里含有一个定语从句；Seeing this picture, I think of the children in remote areas who cannot attend school because of poverty, and of orphans who need better care. 这里含有一个定语从句。

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