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　　考点： 提纲类作文

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　　One possible version

　　There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win. If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.

　　Mayun will never forget his experience. Twenty years ago, when he tried to find a job, he found the door to success closed before him one after another, just because of his bad-looking appearance. However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.

　　In conclusion, failure is a necessary part on our way to be a winner, so never give up and keep on going until you win.

　　(125 words)

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：成功者不是从不失败，而是从不放弃

　　亮点说明：

　　范文使用了较多的语法知识：常用句型There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win；if条件从句If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.；让步状语从句However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.；短语on the way to do sth 等，显示了较高的运用英语语法知识的能力；范文注意使用However, From then on, From this story等衔接前后句和上下文，做到了语意连贯、衔接紧凑；

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