2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：10（含解析）_高考复习指南

2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：10（含解析）

　　Dog-tired as I was, I felt really happy. As the saying goes, helping hands are more sacred than praying lips. I truly believe we’d have a more harmonious society if everybody took action. What a fine deed!

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本篇书面表达属于记叙文的写作范畴,在写作时要注意记论文的六要素,即时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等,都要在文中给予清楚明白地表达。在叙述事情经过时，要写清事情发生与发展的过程以及事情发生的前因后果等,但是要详略得当,分清主次。同时要注意使用一般过去时来叙述过去发生的事情,而且应使用第一人称。.此外要尽量发挥想象力,使用自己熟悉的词语与句型将其扩展成篇,扩展时要注意要求的字数，防止由于字数不够而引起的扣分。

　　【亮点说明】Why not help him collect litter? 让步状语从句Dog-tired as I was,定语从句 As the saying goes,等。.此外谚语helping hands are more sacred than praying lips.和一些高级词汇 refreshment, apparently, struck, farewell parted的使用也是文章的一大亮点,显示了作者词汇的丰富和对词语的准确把握能力..

　　考点：作文

　　5．Boys and Girls,

　　Life is but a hard and bitter journey. Therefore, I would like to say, “ No matter what happens, be self-confident.”

　　I’d like to share my own experience with you. When I was 14, I suffered from a lack of confidence. I didn’t dare to answer teachers’ questions in class and was afraid to speak in public. Later, something happened and changed my life. It was a speech contest held at our school. My mother persuaded me to participate, and she had great confidence in me. I chose a topic most appropriate to me—Self-confidence and Success. I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror. With my mother’s great love and encouragement, I won the first prize in the contest!