2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：15（含解析）_高考复习指南

2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：15（含解析）

　　【解析】

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　　Dear John,

　　Glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in Beijing in the past three years. First the natural scenery of Beijing is very beautiful. More highways have been built, which makes it very convenient for people to travel. There are also many modern and beautiful high buildings. As a result, people’s living conditions have been greatly improved. Besides, a great number of people enjoy themselves traveling and more people can afford and will go abroad to travel with the increase of income. By and by, cars and computers have made their way into millions of homes. With China’s economy developing quickly, more and more foreign companies have come to make an investment here. I’m looking forward to your visiting China soon.

　　Best wishes to you.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一封电子邮件。做题前一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。这篇作文的要点是以提纲列出的，而且很详细，考生要做的是将要点全面的合理的解释清楚，应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。多使用高级词汇和重点句型。

　　【亮点说明】范文使用了高级的短语和各种多变的句式：made their way into 进入，By and by不久， looking forward to盼望， Glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in Beijing in the past three years. 这句话使用了宾语从句，More highways have been built, which makes it very convenient for people to travel.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句和it做形式宾语， With China’s economy developing quickly, more and more foreign companies have come to make an investment here. 这句话使用了with复合结构，还有范文还使用了First，As a result, Besides,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。