From the accident, I have learnt an important lesson: we must be careful on the road anytime.
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参考答案: A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.
解析:本文是一篇命题材料作文。作文的写作要点已经给出,需要考生根据提示进行写作,作文必须涵盖所有要点,还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右,标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性,不能出现与本人有关的信息。 点评:范文使用了一些重点句型:定语从句The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei;原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese...;宾语从句①I could learn a great deal from him about it,②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained;条件状语从句If I could interview him;非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等,显示了扎实的语法功底,也使作文的句式变得多样;范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语:not only...but also...;one of the...;the first to do sth;be interested in;a great deal;such...as等,使作文的内容变得更加丰富;范文注意使用not only...but also, and, also和finally等来衔接句子,使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。
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