2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【思路点拨】本文是议论文,要求学生就“低头族”现象发表自己的看法,故应用一般现在时和第三人称。
【参考范文】
The phenomenon that people are always phubbing is becoming more and more popular.Some people only stare at the screens of their phones,ignoring people around them no matter when they are taking a bus,holding a party or even getting together with their families.Worse still,they will not miss the chance of surfing the Internet or playing the games when they cross the road,which is likely to cause serious accidents and threaten their lives.
It is high time that we threw away the phone and raised our heads up.Do cherish the ones around us and appreciate the splendid scenery ahead of us.
【范文点评】本文要点齐全,层次分明,语言地道。文中灵活使用了that引导的同位语从句、现在分词短语ignoring作伴随状语、no matter when引导的让步状语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句、It is high time that句型和并列祈使句等,显示了考生扎实的语言功底。
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