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Last Friday afternoon, our school held a football match. In order to win the match, we had made good preparations for it — organizing several meetings to discuss the ways and skills to win the match and keeping on exercising to be expert at defending our goal. When the day finally came, we were so convinced of winning that all of us were excited.
However, it didn’t work out as we had expected. The other team did really better than ours in the matching field. We were not the winner; we were the loser. Knowing the result, we were extremely depressed.
From this experience, I realized working hard doesn’t definitely lead to success, but we were happy that we had done our best.
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