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　　Smoke

　　This is a funny and instructive picture.In the picture，a young man is smoking happily in a factory when he sees a sign which means “No smoking”on the wall.But he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke which makes him feel very puzzled，“Why does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself emits so much poisonous smoke？”

　　Nowadays，many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don't allow people smoking in the factory.However，they don't pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society.And they let out lots of polluted smoke which does great harm to our environment.

　　In my opinion，we could live without most of the industrial products，but we could not survive without nature！Therefore，something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories！

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