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Recently,our school is planning to offer us a cooking course as one of the after-school activities.Towards this,students have different attitudes.
In my opinion,the cooking course can be beneficial and enjoyable.By attending it,we can learn a very useful living skill to help ourselves not only live independently but also take care of our families.Besides,taking this course is a way to reduce our study pressure and enrich our after-school life.
To make this course a great success,I’d like to make a suggestion here.I think it would be ideal if the teachers tell us how to cook safely in order not to get hurt while practicing cooking.
Actually,the idea of providing the cooking course for students is very creative and I’m really looking forward to it!
【精彩点评】本文是提纲类作文,要求学生就是否开设烹饪课谈自己的看法,故应用一般现在时和第一人称。文章时态应用得当,足见作者语言功底。文中使用了if引导的主语从句,taking短语做主语,不定式做目的状语、宾语补足语、宾语等;高级短语 in order not to,reduce pressure等;还有actually,in my opinion,beneficial等的灵活运用等给文章增色不少。
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