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①As can be seen from the picture, a big family gets together to have a big dinner. ②But when they sit down to table, the young just bury themselves in playing with their cellphones, totally ignoring their parents, who feel very lonely and sad.
③There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative effect on our lives. ④Heavy use of cellphones actually widens the distance between teenagers and their elders, leaving the elders more lonely. ⑤Worse still, addiction to cellphones might also lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school, which adds to the elders’ worries. ⑥As far as I’m concerned, it’s necessary to limit the time we spend using cellphones. ⑦And I think it important to communicate with our family members face to face, which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.
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1.结构布局
本文可分为两段:
第一段:介绍图画内容,全家人正在聚餐,但年轻人却在玩手机,完全不顾父母的感受;
第二段:陈述“低头族”这种社会现象,并就此现象提出了自己的看法。
2.亮点词汇
bury oneself in, have an effect on, widen, add to, as far as ...concerned, face to face, harmonious
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