2017高三英语二轮复习（江苏专用）主题36“记”：教育成功_高考复习指南

2017高三英语二轮复习（江苏专用）主题36“记”：教育成功

　　Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.

　　【名师点拨】

　　根据提示You cannot choose what you are given，but you can choose how you make use of it.(你不能选择别人给你的，但是你可以选择如何利用别人给你的。)及题目要求，结合事例可知，本文可写成记叙文，记叙对你有极大影响的事，以及你的感想。文章可以写成两段或三段，采用第一人称，记叙事情时用过去时态，发表感想用现在时态。

　　本文使用了大量的高级句式，如：Disappointed as I felt at...(as引导的让步状语从句)，I found the teachers patient and considerate.(find的复合结构)，Whenever I had difficulties...(Whenever引导的让步状语从句)，...which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.(非限制性定语从句)，...it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.(强调句，而且使用了not...but句式)，使得文章非常精彩。而高级词汇、短语的使用，如make the best of，available，motivated，determines等等，更是锦上添花。确实是一篇上乘之作。