参考句式：

　　1．Wish he will succeed!

　　2．Wish his dream come true!

　　3．Good luck to him!

　　4．Wish him a fantastic future!

　　【范文点评】

　　Will Pan

　　①Will Pan, one of the most famous pop stars now in China, was born on August 6, 1980 in Shanghai.He is about 1.74 meters tall and is a handsome young man.

　　②Will Pan can speak English as well as Chinese.His most favorite songs are Hip Hop, R & B, and the Chinese Pop Music and he

　　himself sings many good songs of this kind. During his free time, he is fond of taking part in sports, and his favorite sport is basketball. ③Though he is famous, he is easy to get along with.He is lovely and actively.④He always wears a big smile on his face, so more and more young men and women become his fans.

　　Pan has many wishes.⑤ To become a super idol becomes the biggest one of them.

　　①one of the most...作Will Pan的同位语使句子灵活。

　　②as well as用得好，也可用not only...but also...。

　　③转折词使用得当。

　　④wear a big smile表示带着微笑，使句子增色很多。

　　⑤用动词不定式作主语避免了文章句式的单调。

　　⑥加上祝愿语使得文章活泼生动。

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