2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：47_高考复习指南

2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：47

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Mike

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　　【答案】【知识点】议论文Dear editor,

　　With the development and popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become more and more common in China. I’m writing to share my views about online shopping.

　　On the one hand, I believe it’s convenient and economical. With the help of online shopping, we can buy things we want at home with a click of the mouse instead of going to the shopping mall. Besides, we might save money by comparing the price of goods sold in different online shops.

　　On the other hand, it might lead to many problems. For one thing, your package can’t always reach you on time due to various unexpected reasons. For another, you can’t try on the clothes to see if they fit you or not like you do when shopping in a real shop.

　　All in all, I hold that high school students should have a cautious attitude towards online shopping in order to avoid wasting money or buying things of poor quality.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Mike

　　【思路点拨】范文围绕网络购物展开，抓住了写作要点。第一段先说明网购的现象，然后表明写这篇稿件的目的。二、三段围绕网络购物的优点和缺点。两段开头分别用On the one hand ，On the other hand串接起来，写作层次清晰For one thing, For another逐一列出网络购物的缺点，使行文更加流畅。最后一段用总结性的话all in all，用have a cautious attitude towards短语表明中学生对待网购应有的态度。总体来说本文论述结构严谨，条理清晰，词汇丰富，句式多变