2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：20_高考复习指南

2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：20

　　2. 首句已给出，不计入总句数。

　　【评分标准】

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them.___________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them. To ensure the safety of phone users on the road, the first “mobile phone sidewalk in China” was built in Yangrenjie Scenic Spot, Chongqing. It is divided into two pathways, one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. As for its appearance, different people hold different opinions. Some people think it reasonable, viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. However, others consider it pointless, believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.

　　【解析】

　　【思路点拨】本文是议论文，主要讨论是否应该为手机族设专线的问题，学生很容易把握要点，也容易写出自己的感想和评价。

　　该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用to ensure不定式结构作状语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了as for，while，however等连接结构。文中使用了get rid of，get addicted to doing等高级词汇。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。