短句变长句

　　【佳句选粹1】

　　【原文】 【优化】

　　Lies do harm to those who are being told.Lies also do harm to those who tell them. Lies not_only do harm to those who are being told，but_also do harm to those who tell them.

　　【分析】　原来的两个句子之间存在明显的并列关系，因此应将其合二为一，改写成由“not only...，but also...”连接成的一个并列句，这样才更符合英语作为“形合语言”的特点。

　　【佳句选粹2】

　　【原文】 【优化】

　　His overall performance was outstanding and worked extremely well with people.He always proves himself hardworking and modest. 　His overall performance was outstanding and worked extremely well with people and he always proves himself hardworking and modest.

　　【分析】原来的两个句子之间存在明显的并列关系，因此应将其合二为一，改写成由and连接成的一个

　　并列句，这样才更符合英语作为“形合语言”的特点。

　　【原文】 【优化】

　　In most countries，schools can be divided into two broad categories：public schools and private schools.Public schools are financed by the government and enroll both boys and girls.The majority of private schools are single－sex educational establishments. In most countries，schools can be divided into two broad categories： public schools，which are financed by the government and enroll both boys and girls，and private schools，the_majority_of_which are single－sex educational establishments.

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