2017届高三英语一轮复习同步课件：Unit 5 Period 3（人教版选修六）_高考复习指南

2017届高三英语一轮复习同步课件：Unit 5 Period 3（人教版选修六）

　　Xiao Hong，aged 15，was a monitress in a mountain village school.She was about to visit her friends when she found her mother washing clothes in the courtyard.They didn’t have a washing machine.Seeing her mother look tired，she picked up the phone to cancel the appointment.She smiled and helped her mother with washing and the other housework …

　　然后以120词写一篇记叙文，描写在母亲节给妈妈送礼物的一次经历，并包括以下的内容要点： (1)叙述一次在母亲节给妈妈送礼物的真实或虚构的经历； (2)你送礼物的经过； (3)你对这件事情的感想。

　　【写作要求】 1．可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构，组织例子或故事，但不得直接引用原文的句子； 2．标题自定

　　四、学生样本分析 1 That day was Mother’s day.But my mother couldn’t spend the day with me because she was ill in hospital.2 I got up early to see her.When I got to her room，I found she was still sleeping，so I decided to go to buy breakfast for my mother. 1．开头缺少了“点题”，可以加上“This year’s mother’s day is the most unforgettable day for me”点明主题。 2．“指向”部分有味道，感人，吸引人。 3．总结评论：第一段交代清楚了记叙文的基本要素：时间、地点、人物、事件。 After I bought her some breakfast,4 it rained heavily suddenly. I had to wait until the rain stopped in the shop.Half an hour past，it still rained heavily.I thought my mother might get up and wait for me.So I decided to run to the hospital without an umbrella.I was wet and felt cold when I was running in the heavy rain.Suddenly I fell down because I stepped upon skins of banana.All the breakfast were fallen on the street at the same time，so I had to buy another breakfast for her again.When I went back to mother’s room with breakfast，my mother felt surprised for my wet and dirty clothes.5 I found her eyes was filled with tears.