It is not wrong of people to pursue wealth but meanwhile they should also try to learn to fulfill their knowledge. A person with a broad as well as wealth is more attractive and admirable.
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作。作文给出了一个话题一篇题目为《我家没有宝马车,只有藏书数千卷》的帖子,只有少数的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁,应用了一些较好的词组和句子: attracts one’s attention吸引某人的注意力, In one’s eyes在某人眼中, make every effort to do 努力做, show off炫耀, The writer of the post is a Senior III girl student of Chongqing, who wishes more of her peers to read more good books. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句, Nowadays there are many people showing off their BMW or wealth that they own. Therefore they give up other ambitions that are more meaningful, especially spiritual or culture ones. 这两句话也用了定语从句, It is not wrong of people to pursue wealth but meanwhile they should also try to learn to fulfill their knowledge. 这句话用了it做形式主语。
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