【解析】

　　试题分析：写作时认真审题，确定体裁。应注意以下几个方面。(1)时态错误：文章中忽视了动作发生的时间。(2)人称代词错误：单复数、形容词性物主代词与名词性物主代词错误。(3)名词单复数、动词单复数、主谓语不一致。(4)用词错误：对同义词的区别、使用场合、习惯用法不熟悉，或者忘记了单词。(5)内容不连贯：不会用关联词，语序混乱。没有统筹安排，写到哪里，就停在哪里。(6)大小写、标点符号错误，缺少冠词。()书写混乱，卷面潦草。

　　4．

　　As you are growing, you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions. However, your parents will disagree with you. Your relationship with your parents may be in trouble right now. Here are some tips for you to avoid quarrels with your parents.

　　Discuss the rules ahead of time and not at the last minute. This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no to before you make plans.

　　Try to remain calm when your parents say no to something. You’d better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them.

　　Spend time with your family. Communicate with each other at home. Suggest activities that your whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike, a bike ride, or going to the beach.

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