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试题分析:本文是
【亮点说明】使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,on good terms with,get on well with, for example,还有that引导的表语从句,most of whom引导的非限制性定语从句等。在行文连贯方面运用了如so, besides,what’s more, and等。
考点:提纲作文。
Possible version:
Try to Do the Small Things around You
Peter found water running out of a tap but turned a blind eye to it,while Mary, a girl of responsibilities, took a different attitude and rushed to turn it off.
(简要评述Mary或Peter的行为并说明你的理由) As for me, Mary is really great, because she is ready to do something that seems very small. Maybe her behavior is very common in someone’s eyes, but it is playing and will continue to play an important part in our daily life.
(叙述你或你身边所发生的类似的故事)We could see such kinds of small things around us every day. For example, when we leave the classroom, we just ignore the lights and computers and leave them on; when we have dinners, we often use the one time used chopsticks and plastic bags; when we finish some drinks and food, we throw the leftover very causally. Water wasting is often noticed here and there, too. For example, when some students take a bath, wash their hands, bowls or clothes, the running water doesn’t stop until everything ends. What’s worse, some students seldom turn off the tap/water, leaving it dropping all the way, even if everything is finished.
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