I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. Let your daughter take part in more social activities and let her make mistakes, which is quite normal.
Yours,
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【解析】
试题分析:本文是篇材料作文,材料非常简单,学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,要求是人们对90后的评价,所以要用一般时。本文必须用第一人称。再有就是应该注意句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如还运用了等。并注意了句子的衔接如:等等。
考点:提纲作文
4.
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Fujian, When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.
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