One possible version:

　　Recently，a survey has been conducted about whether a teacher should judge his students' success by the money they have earned.

　　As can be seen from the picture，a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and failure.But opinions are divided among the surveyed people.Just as the pie chart shows,70% of them oppose the teacher's view.They think that teachers shouldn't judge their students' success by money，while 25% of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money.There are also a few people who don't voice their opinions.

　　As far as I am

　　concerned，we should understand success in a reasonable way.Money is certainly one

　　way to measure success，but it is not the only way.

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