【3年高考2年模拟】2016届高三英语一轮复习课件写作指导三句式变化_高考复习指南

【3年高考2年模拟】2016届高三英语一轮复习课件写作指导三句式变化

　　the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is un- likely to be true. 句式变化三:长短句交叉长句和短句是就句子的词数多少、形体长短而言的。长句和短句各有其优点和缺点。长句因为使用的定语、状语较多,限制了概念的外延,增大了概念的内涵,所以比较精确、严密,但使用起来不够活泼简便。短句由于词数少,直截了当,一般比较简洁、明快、有力,但不利于表达复杂的语义内容。在具体语言活动中,最好长短句交替使用。这既体现了节奏上的要求,也是意义上的需要。如: ①We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.②There are many trees along

　　the streets.③There is a clean river in the city.④There are many fishes in the river.⑤There are willow trees on the one side.⑥There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.⑦There are many flowers on them. 以上七个句子都是简单句,句型结构单一,而且句子长短统一都在七八词左右,十分单调。下面是修改后的段落: ①Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener.② Green trees line the streets.③A clean river winds through the city,in which a lot of fishes abound.④On the one side stand rows of willow trees.⑤On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers. 改写后的这段文字,有长句①、③、⑤,也有短句②和④,一长一短,抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。不仅句子长短交替,而且句型结构变化也很大, 使文章流畅自然、生动活泼。再如: The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world,and in spring time it often overflows its banks,and the lives of many people are endan- gered. 此句用and把三个分句一贯到底,既乏味又可笑。如果使用了关系代词 which,语义就会更连贯,语言也会更流畅。如: The Mississippi River,which is one of the longest rivers in the world,often overflows its banks in spring time,endangering the lives of many people. 句式变化四:利用倒装结构英语的基本句型是S+V+O,如果偶尔打破常规,改变某一成分的位置,不仅可以丰富句型,而且能强调、突出被倒装的部分,收到意想不到的表达效果。如: In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2017 Olympic Games. 总之,英语的句式是多种多样的,只要从要表达的内容出发,合理选用,文章的句式就会富于变化。同时,在学习写作的过程中,考生应不断练习各种各样的句式构造,以提高语言表达能力。 2 写作典例 (2017湖南) 学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic ”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的创意。内容: 1.说明设计理由; 2.介绍新功能。注意: 1.词数不少于120个; 2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【范文】 My magic neutral water pen The neutral water pen is widely used in the process of study but we often have trouble using them because of its limited ink and other inconvenience. To deal with these problems,consequently,I have worked heart and soul to create my own magic neutral water pen. The most shining function of this newly designed pen is that it will contain special ink powder which makes it have endless ink.Furthermore,the pen is made of the extremely strong materials,which can protect the pen from the damage when it might fall down onto the ground.Better still,so smoothly does it write that it can contribute to making our handwriting better. Such is my magic neutral water pen.Are you interested in it? Hope it will be of great use for users. 【写作点评】 (1)第二段以不定式短语To deal with these problems开头,使文章句式充满多样性。 (2)巧妙地运用了连词:that,when,丰富了文章的句型,也使文章更加连贯了。 (3)使用了定语从句、状语从句,彰显了作者的写作功底,也增加了得分点。 3 跟踪训练 (2017山西忻州一中期中) 假如你是高三学生李华,你校正在组织寒假赴英冬令营营员选拔活动。冬令营由英国文化委员会(British Council)组织,营地在牛津大学(Oxford University)。请根据以下要点给你的英国笔友John写一封电子邮件: 1.你很感兴趣,认为机会难得。 2.家人反对及其反对的理由。 3.希望John给出建议。注意:1.词数100左右;