I like the proverb because it tells a valuable philosophy of life.Achieving our goals is always not easy,but if we have a strong will,we are sure to realize them.
Once I was not very good at English.I didn’t know enough English words and my grammar was also poor,which really made me upset.Fortunately,my English teacher noticed my bad situation and said to me,“Don’t lose heart.Remember:where there is a will,there is a way.”Suddenly I was re- minded of the sentence on the blackboard! From then on,I decided to work hard on my English and it finally paid off. My English improved a lot and,more importantly,I gained much confidence. 【写作点评】 (1)作者运用了一些较为高级的词汇和短语:enter,valuable,upset,fortunate- ly,lose heart,from then on等,丰富了表达的内容。 (2)熟练地使用了各类词或短语引导的状语从句:the moment,because,if等, 使整篇文章结构紧凑、表达自如。 (3)准确地运用了过渡词语,使上下句连接顺畅,增加了得分点。 3 跟踪训练 (2017浙江诸暨中学期中) 高中生由于冲动并且不知道如何用正确的方法控制自己而往往会引发 同学间的冲突。请根据此现象用英语写一篇100词左右的文章。内容要 求如下: 1.记述一件发生在你自己或身边同学身上的一次同学之间的冲突。 2.简要阐述冲突发生时该如何正确处理。 注意:文章首句已给出(不计入总词数) Conflicts among us students are quite common because we are impulsive and don’t know how to control ourselves when they happen. 【范文】 Conflicts among us students are quite common because we are impulsive and don’t know how to control ourselves when they happen.The other day, while waiting for my turn in the canteen,I stepped on another boy’s toes quite by accident.Immediately,I apologized.The boy,however,glared at me, saying that I did that deliberately.His rude remarks annoyed me too.I turned my back to him and tried to ignore him.But to my great surprise,he pushed me hard from behind.It was more than I could bear and eventually the quar- rel changed into an act of violence. Despite the fact that conflicts are unavoidable,we,when involved,ought to keep calm,put ourselves into others’ shoes and find a proper way out rather
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