2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分写作提升系列第一板块能力层级（一）第4节(北师大版)_高考复习指南

2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分写作提升系列第一板块能力层级（一）第4节(北师大版)

　　[学以致用] 把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句 1．I’ve always longed for the days. I will be able to be independent then. I’ve_always_longed_for_the_days_when_I_will_be_able_to_be_independent. 2．I have a friend. Her father is an engineer. I_have_a_friend_whose_father_is_an_engineer. 3．They planted the trees. The trees didn’t need much water. They_planted_the_trees_that/which_didn’t_need_much_water. 4．This is the best method. It can be used against pollution. This_is_the_best_method_that_can_be_used_against_pollution. 5．They sent the elderly some fruits，cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them. The elderly always feel lonely. They_sent_some_fruits_to_the_elderly_who_always_feel_lonely，cleaned_the_rooms_and_had_a_good_chat_with_them.

　　三、定语从句写作的几点注意事项 1．误用关系词误：I live in Beijing，where is the capital of China. 正：I live in Beijing，which is the capital of China. 误：I have a friend，who’s name is Liu Mei. 正：I have a friend，whose name is Liu Mei. 2．句子残缺误：There were many students took part in the English competition. 正：There were many students who took part in the English competition. 误：Those who in favor of the proposal，please raise your hands. 正：Those who are in favor of the proposal，please raise your hands.

　　3．有多余词误：The film I saw it last night was really very good. 正：The film I saw last night was really very good. 误：Last week，I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood. 正：Last week，I returned to the village where I grew up in my childhood. 4．定语从句与并列句的混淆误：In fact，smoking is a bad habit，it does great harm to people’s health. 正：In fact，smoking is a bad habit，which/and it does great harm to people’s health. 误：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river，it didn’t help. 正：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river，which/but it didn’t help. [学以致用] 单句改错 1．Those have work experience can find a job easily.________ 答案　Those后加who 2．Some songs remind us of the people which we love.________ 答案　which→ who(m) 3．This is the factory we visited it last year.________ 答案　去掉it 4．She has been a teacher for 30 years in the place where used to be a poor area.________ 答案　where→ which/that 5．As a child，Jack studied in a village school，it is named after his grandfather.________ 答案　it→ which或在it前加and