2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分写作提升系列第一板块能力层级（一）第6节(北师大版)_高考复习指南

2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分写作提升系列第一板块能力层级（一）第6节(北师大版)

　　第二步：把after引导的时间状语从句转换为非谓语动词，practice与we之间为主谓关系，且表示完成，故用现在分词的完成时作状语。 →Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.(2017·湖南高考满分作文) 其他几个转换的例子如下： 1．惊诧于他们的熟练程度，我决心要像他们一样好。 Because I was amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good. →Amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.(2017·浙江高考满分作文)(过去分词作状语) 2．看到一辆车朝她而来，我伸出手把她拉了回来。 When I saw a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.

　　→Seeing a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.(2017·安徽高考满分作文)(现在分词作状语) 3．这里曾有一家化肥厂，位于城市的南边。它每天释放出大量有毒气体，污染环境。 There was a large factory，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，which polluted the environment. →There was a large factory，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，polluting the environment. 简析：“原句”中分别由which引导两个定语从句，重复且单调，将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语作状语后，不仅表达多样，而且言简意明。 4．由于老师的帮助，我的英语进步很大。因为我的英语进步很大，我确信我能考上更好的大学。 Because my teacher helps me，my English has greatly improved. Because my English has greatly improved，I’m sure I will go to a better university. →With my teacher helping me，my English has greatly improved. Because my English has greatly improved，I’m sure I will go to a better university. 简析：“原句”两处重复出现由because引导的从句，读起来很别扭。换用“with＋现在分词的复合结构”后，读起来给人的感觉大不一样。 [学以致用] 运用非谓语动词转换复合句 1．As soon as they saw a few people still in the burning house，they rushed into it to save them without hesitation. →On seeing a few people still in the burning house，they rushed into it to save them without hesitation. 2．We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think that it is possible that they can master one. →We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think it possible for them to master one． 3．I took part in the meeting，which was held in Beijing last Friday. It was very instructive，which was hosted by a manager who came to our company yesterday. →I took part in the meeting held in Beijing last Friday. It was very instructive，which was hosted by a manager coming to our company yesterday. 4．Mother went to work in a hurry，and she didn’t have breakfast. She was as busy as a bee these days and came back home very late. →Mother went to work in a hurry without having breakfast. She was as busy as a bee these days，coming back home very late．三、运用非谓语动词转换短文(根据一般表达写出该短文的高级表达) 　北京市有大量的出租车司机，他们每天全心全意地为乘客服务，对北京市的交通发挥着重要作用。他们起早贪黑，赚钱养家糊口。有一次，我下车时不小心把手机忘在了车上，但当我和司机同志联系上之后，他立即开车把手机送到了我的家门口，让我感动不已。一般表达： There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing. They serve passengers heart and soul. They play an important part in the traffic of Beijing.They make some money. They work from dawn till night. One day，I left my cellphone in the taxi I took. I got in touch with the driver. He drove to my home and gave it back to me. I was very excited.