→I am pretty convinced that a wise choice leads to perfection.(2017·上海高考满分作文) 我非常相信,英明的选择会通向完美。 2.变换语序 适当变换语序也有助于提高句子新颖性。在评卷过程中,倒装句、插入语等非正常语序形式都能让评卷人眼前一亮。 (1)I was so excited that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. →So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.(2017·福建高考满分作文) 我那么激动以致于我迫不及待的尝试骑它。 (2)I guess you must have had no end of trouble. →You must have had no end of trouble,I guess. 我想你一定经历过无数的困难。 [学以致用] 用变换用词或语序的方式增加新颖性 1.We should remember that hard work leads to success. →We should bear in mind that hard work leads to success. 2.Recycled bags are better than plastic bags in environment protecting. →Recycled bags are superior to/have advantages over plastic bags in environment protecting. 3.The days when we Chinese people were looked down upon are gone. →Gone are the days when we Chinese people were looked down upon. 4.A beautiful smile can not only make ourselves happy,but also enable others to be delighted. →Not only can a beautiful smile make ourselves happy,but also enable others to be delighted. 原则二:具体性 在具备一定词汇量的条件下,具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起读者的共鸣。换句话说,写作需要“真善美”,尽量避免“假大空”。 1.My friend is fixing the car. →My friend,Leon,is fixing his 12yearold Santana. 2.I saw my classmate studying in the classroom. →I saw my naughty but lovely classmate studying in the classroom. [学以致用] 用“具体性原则”把“假大空版”改为“真善美版” 写作要求:学校要举行一场题为“Turning a bad mood into a good one”的英语作文比赛,要求你写一篇文章,其中一个要点是如何调整心情。 假大空版:Keeping a good mood is of great importance. When you feel angry or anxious,calm down. It is useless losing a temper and we should always make ourselves happy. 真善美版:We should learn to keep a good mood. Communicating with family members or friends is the best choice. Also listening to some peaceful music can be helpful. Reading is another way to stop being mad. 原则三:简洁性 写作过程中,不必为了增添字数而采用冗余表达。给评分者带来好感的不是字数,而是简洁明了、条理清晰的语句。 1.His brother,who is a tourist guide,will help us plan this trip. →His brother,a tourist guide,will help us plan this trip. 2.They found the answer to be quite satisfactory. →They found the answer quite satisfactory. [学以致用] 用“简洁性原则”简化下面的句子 1.The friendship that is based on profits won’t last long. The friendship based on profits won’t last long. 2.They consider Paris to be the brain and heart of the country. They consider Paris the brain and heart of the country. 原则四:紧凑性 作文中难免用到短句,但如果短句太多,会使人感到段落过于零散。因此需要将过多的短句整合成紧凑的句子。 Most tourist attractions in China are littered. This lake is the worst. →Most tourist attractions in China are littered,the worst of which is this lake. →Most tourist attractions in China are littered,with this lake being the worst. [学以致用] 用“紧凑性原则”整合下面的句子 1.He is our English teacher. His name is Wang Bin. He has taught us for two years. Wang Bin,our English teacher,has taught us for two years. 2.They finished repairing the broken chair together. They felt very happy.
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